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English proofreading of my AICCSA paper

abdelwaheb turki


Dear Mr. or Ms.,

I thank you for your support to my AICCSA paper. This is an honour of me. I have done quite all the required revisions. However, its English is still not proofread. I ask if you can verify and adjust the language quality of my AICCSA paper. It is currently available in https://1drv.ms/w/s!AiC69hcGxSVPl1UI1SV81mkr2uVu. As for the grant to attend AICCSA 2017, you can still endorse it in https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Grants:Project/Rapid/Csisc/Presenting_Wikidata_for_Arab_Computational_Linguists.<https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Grants:Project/Rapid/Csisc/Presenting_Wikidata_for_Arab_Computational_Linguists>

Yours Sincerely,

Houcemeddine Turki

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De : ANLP2017 <[hidden email]>
Envoyé : mercredi 16 août 2017 00:53
À : Houcemeddine Turki
Objet : ANLP2017 notification for paper 3

Dear Dr.Houcemeddine Turki

Congratulations! On behalf of the ANLP 2017 workshop and Conference Committees of the 14th ACS/IEEE International Conference on Computer Systems and Applications AICCSA 2017, October 30th to November 3rd, 2017.
 we are happy to inform you that your paper entitled:

Using WikiData to create a multi-lingual multi-dialectal dictionary for Arabic dialects

has been accepted for presentation and inclusion in the Proceedings of AICCSA - ANLP 2017, published by IEEE.


Please see the reviewers’ comments below on your paper. These comments are intended to help you to improve your paper for final publication. The listed comments should be addressed, as final acceptance is conditional upon appropriate response to the requirements and comments. The conference committee retains a list of certain critical comments to be addressed by authors, and will control that these have been addressed in the camera-ready version.


What is next:
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The AICCSA website is updated now with required information. Please find below the details for the camera ready submission and the registration.

Camera ready submission:
Due date: 31/8/2017
Submission information can be found at the following link: http://www.aiccsa.net/AICCSA2017/submission

Final Camera Ready and copyright instructions<http://www.aiccsa.net/AICCSA2017/submission>
www.aiccsa.net
14th ACS/IEEE International Conference on Computer Systems and Applications AICCSA 2017 October 30th to November 3rd, 2017




Paper Registration:
Due date: 8/9/2017
The registration information can be found at the following link: http://www.aiccsa.net/AICCSA2017/registration

Registration - AICCSA<http://www.aiccsa.net/AICCSA2017/registration>
www.aiccsa.net
14th ACS/IEEE International Conference on Computer Systems and Applications AICCSA 2017 October 30th to November 3rd, 2017




We are looking to meet you in AICCSA 2017.

Best Regards,

AICCSA - ANLP 2017 Organization Team.

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----------------------- REVIEW 1 ---------------------
PAPER: 3
TITLE: Using WikiData to create a multi-lingual multi-dialectal dictionary for Arabic dialects
AUTHORS: Houcemeddine Turki, Denny Vrandečić, Helmi Hamdi and Imed Adel

Overall evaluation: 1 (weak accept)

----------- Overall evaluation -----------
It is an interesting work with valid assumption and its proposed ideas also in line with the expectation of the event. Overall, I think, this paper is interesting and has good contribution to this topic. However, the authors are advised to have the following points on their revised version:
-Please elaborate in details about the proposed approach with more focusing on the relations between its components, as they are the core of the solution and need more justification of why to use them.
-Overall technical exposition must be strengthened with more concrete examples.
-The authors are urged to summarize and list the key observations from the paper.
-The paper is readable but a language improvement using a native speaker is recommended.
-Some minor editorial issue, like enhancing the plots quality, the equations, etc...
-Many reference are with *incomplete* bibliographic information (like lack of publication venue, for instance). This must be corrected.

In summery, it a well prepared paper.


----------------------- REVIEW 2 ---------------------
PAPER: 3
TITLE: Using WikiData to create a multi-lingual multi-dialectal dictionary for Arabic dialects
AUTHORS: Houcemeddine Turki, Denny Vrandečić, Helmi Hamdi and Imed Adel

Overall evaluation: 0 (borderline paper)

----------- Overall evaluation -----------
The paper technical content is very marginal, the paper has many language and editorial issue,
a better results presentation and figs quality are needed. i guess the paper is not ready for publication yet.

Other issues to be considered too:

- The paper lacks clarity in motivating the proposed research and in stating its expected outcome
- the review of the state of the art lacks an analysis of the existing work and the positioning of the research in the state of the art
- The methodology is too general and does not convincingly show the feasibility of the proposed approach
- the research lacks a concrete illustration on a case study.

recommendation to the authors
- to clearly state the objective of the research in terms of problems to address and expected results and show how the proposed research will advance the state of the art by
overcoming the limitations of the existing work
- to preset an analysis of the state of the art and discuss the benefits/limitations of the existing approaches with respect to the addressed research problem
- to be more precise in the description of the methodology and show how the methodology would achieve the stated objectives
- to discuss the future plans with respect to the research state of progress and its limitations

There is serious issue with many editorials in the paper that need to be fixed, many of the figs are fuzzy and need to be reconsidered again.

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